I'm doing the editorial review I promised, but I'm having a little
problem with Section 4.1 (which may also apply to other sections as I
move forward). Section 4.1 says at first that it is defining a new
802.11n Radio Capability information element. Then at the end of the
paragraph, it says it is defining a new 802.11n Radio Capability message
element.
I don't believe it is doing either one. Instead, it should simply say
that this document specifies use of the IEEE 802.11 Information Element
to transport the IEEE 802.11 HT information element.
Does this sound reasonable?
Tom
On 04/11/2013 1:22 PM, Liu Dapeng wrote:
Hi Dan,
Thank you for your kind review and valuable comments. We will address all
your comments in the next version and will improve the writing as well.
Tom Taylor has volunteered to do the editorial review and that would be
very helpful to improve the quality of the draft. Many thanks to Tom.
...
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