2013/11/5 Tom Taylor <[email protected]> > I'm doing the editorial review I promised, but I'm having a little problem > with Section 4.1 (which may also apply to other sections as I move > forward). Section 4.1 says at first that it is defining a new 802.11n Radio > Capability information element. Then at the end of the paragraph, it says > it is defining a new 802.11n Radio Capability message element. > > I don't believe it is doing either one. Instead, it should simply say that > this document specifies use of the IEEE 802.11 Information Element to > transport the IEEE 802.11 HT information element. > > Does this sound reasonable?
Yes. Thanks. Dapeng Liu > > > Tom > > > On 04/11/2013 1:22 PM, Liu Dapeng wrote: > >> Hi Dan, >> >> Thank you for your kind review and valuable comments. We will address all >> your comments in the next version and will improve the writing as well. >> Tom Taylor has volunteered to do the editorial review and that would be >> very helpful to improve the quality of the draft. Many thanks to Tom. >> >> ... > -- ------ Best Regards, Dapeng Liu
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