You're not the first to tell me that (Warren was).  I'd like to say I
have some control over Exchange, but I did everything "right".  Still,
thanks for the second report.  I'll see if I can fix that for future OOO
stints.

Joe

On 3/28/22 11:45, tom petch wrote:
> Joe
>
> My post generated an automatic reply from the e-mail address that you are 
> using but with no content; I was expecting 'I am out of the office ...' but 
> no, nothing,
>
> Tom Petch
>
> ________________________________________
> From: Joe Clarke (jclarke) <[email protected]>
> Sent: 28 March 2022 14:49
> To: [email protected]; tom petch; Benoit Claise; Jean Quilbeuf; 
> [email protected]
> Subject: Re: [OPSAWG] Comments on draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-yang-02
>
> Sometimes the threat of WG LC is enough to get some comments :-).
> Thanks, Med and Tom for doing this.
>
> Joe
>
> On 3/28/22 09:24, [email protected] wrote:
>> Hi all,
>>
>> In addition to the list provided by Tom, here is some additional items to be 
>> fixed. Most are easy-to-fix:
>>
>> * s/This document proposes/This document specifies
>> * I'm still not sure why this is restricted to "Intent-based Networking 
>> Architecture" in the abstract.
>> * Move Section I to be positioned right after Section II
>> * fix the validation errors
>> * run "pyang -f yang --yang-canonical"
>> * run "pyang -f tree --tree-line-length 69" for generating the trees.
>> * registered prefixes do not match the ones in the modules.
>> * remove <CODE BEGINS> and <CODE ENDS> from the examples.
>> * not sure what is the rationale for having only one address per device, two 
>> devices, why not a name is used to identify a device, etc. (Section 8.1). It 
>> seems this about unicast connectivity, and not cover multicast.
>> * Why only IS-IS is covered?
>>
>> I'm not sure this version is ready for WGLC, though.
>>
>> Cheers,
>> Med
>>
>>> -----Message d'origine-----
>>> De : OPSAWG <[email protected]> De la part de tom petch
>>> Envoyé : lundi 28 mars 2022 11:59
>>> À : Benoit Claise <[email protected]>; Jean
>>> Quilbeuf <[email protected]>; Joe Clarke
>>> (jclarke) <[email protected]>; [email protected]
>>> Objet : Re: [OPSAWG] Comments on draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-
>>> yang-02
>>>
>>> From: OPSAWG <[email protected]> on behalf of Benoit Claise
>>> <[email protected]>
>>> Sent: 25 March 2022 10:57
>>>
>>> Dear OPSAWG chairs,
>>>
>>> As discussed during the WG session, the authors believe the two draft-
>>> ietf-opsawg-service-assurance drafts are ready for WGLC.
>>>
>>> <tp>
>>>
>>> May be.
>>>
>>> This is the first module I can recall where the prefix is longer than
>>> any of the identifiers that are prefixed.  'service-assurance-
>>> interface:' does not make for an easy read IMHO.
>>>
>>> Several places have an unfinished look.
>>> - RFC xxxx: Title to be completed
>>> - TO DO - Better type ...
>>> - TLP ood
>>> - YANG import no reference clause
>>> -  line length in excess of 100 characters
>>> - NMDA not mentioned
>>> - string with no indication of acceptable characters sometimes attracts
>>> a DISCUSS
>>> - mailto:[email protected]
>>>
>>> Tom Petch
>>>
>>>
>>> Regards, Benoit
>>>
>>> On 3/25/2022 11:48 AM, Jean Quilbeuf wrote:
>>>> Hi Joe,
>>>> Thanks for your comments.
>>>>
>>>> I updated the draft with some more details about the relation between
>>> healt-score and health-score-weight.
>>>> I left the counter so far, but changed it to 64 bits.
>>>>
>>>> Best,
>>>> Jean
>>>>
>>>>> -----Original Message-----
>>>>> From: Joe Clarke (jclarke) [mailto:[email protected]]
>>>>> Sent: Thursday 24 March 2022 12:42
>>>>> To: Benoit Claise <[email protected]>; Jean
>>>>> Quilbeuf <[email protected]>; [email protected]
>>>>> Subject: Re: [OPSAWG] Comments on
>>>>> draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-
>>>>> yang-02
>>>>>
>>>>> On 3/24/22 08:21, Benoit Claise wrote:
>>>>>> Hi Joe,
>>>>>>
>>>>>> On 3/24/2022 11:48 AM, Joe Clarke (jclarke) wrote:
>>>>>>> On 3/9/22 11:13, Jean Quilbeuf wrote:
>>>>>>>> Hi Joe,
>>>>>>>> Thanks for your comments.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> First, what is the purpose of assurance-graph-version?  It's a
>>>>>>>>> 32-bit
>>>>> counter that can increment when something goes in and out of
>>>>> maintenance (+2).  I can easily see this wrapping fir services with a
>>>>> lot of churn.  What is the impact of that?  Is this version number
>>>>> required if we have a last modified timestamp?
>>>>>>>> The purpose of assurance-graph-version is to enable  a consumer of
>>>>>>>> this
>>>>> module to quickly check if they have the last version. It probably
>>>>> makes sense to use a larger counter. I'll modify it.
>>>>>>> How does it do that.  If I get a version of 324523457273456, how do
>>>>>>> I know that's the latest?
>>>>>> MdT on-change.
>>>>> Fair.  But then, as a consumer, I know it's the latest because it's
>>>>> the update I just got.  And still, the date will be more useful...
>>>>>
>>>>> I know I'm being difficult and bike-sheddy.  It doesn't really bother
>>>>> me.  Just trying to make sure there's true use for it.
>>>>>
>>>>> Joe
>>>>>
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