Thank you very much for the review and comments. I will look over the comments, and revise shortly. On Nov 25, 2015 4:58 PM, "Alissa Cooper" <[email protected]> wrote:
> I have reviewed this document in preparation for IETF last call. There are > a few edits that need to be made before this document can be last-called: > > 1) The document needs a security considerations section. It is perfectly > fine if this section mostly points to the security considerations of the > other p2psip documents, but it needs to be there. > > 2) Section 3.5 and Section 7 have text marked as “OPEN ISSUE.” These need > to be resolved. > > 3) Section 1 should be deleted. > > > While you’re making changes, please address the following: > > 4) Fix the ID nits. > > 5) I think Section 3.5 should reference RFC 6762 and 6763 rather than > Bonjour. > > 6) The Wikipedia references in Section 5 and 6 don’t really seem > appropriate and don’t add much value, so I would suggest deleting them. > > 7) References to “the RELOAD base draft” should not call it a draft and > should reference the RFC. > > > Thanks, > Alissa > _______________________________________________ > P2PSIP mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/p2psip >
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