Great, thank you. > On Jan 14, 2016, at 10:39 AM, David Bryan <[email protected]> wrote: > > Thanks for the note -- quite soon. Between end of semester, holiday travel, > and now start of the semester there was no time, but things have cleared up > and it is back on my list. > > David > > On Thu, Jan 14, 2016 at 10:11 AM, Alissa Cooper <[email protected] > <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote: > Hi David, > > Do you have an estimate for when this will be completed? > > Thanks, > Alissa > >> On Nov 25, 2015, at 7:55 PM, David Bryan <[email protected] >> <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote: >> >> Thank you very much for the review and comments. >> >> I will look over the comments, and revise shortly. >> >> On Nov 25, 2015 4:58 PM, "Alissa Cooper" <[email protected] >> <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote: >> I have reviewed this document in preparation for IETF last call. There are a >> few edits that need to be made before this document can be last-called: >> >> 1) The document needs a security considerations section. It is perfectly >> fine if this section mostly points to the security considerations of the >> other p2psip documents, but it needs to be there. >> >> 2) Section 3.5 and Section 7 have text marked as “OPEN ISSUE.” These need to >> be resolved. >> >> 3) Section 1 should be deleted. >> >> >> While you’re making changes, please address the following: >> >> 4) Fix the ID nits. >> >> 5) I think Section 3.5 should reference RFC 6762 and 6763 rather than >> Bonjour. >> >> 6) The Wikipedia references in Section 5 and 6 don’t really seem appropriate >> and don’t add much value, so I would suggest deleting them. >> >> 7) References to “the RELOAD base draft” should not call it a draft and >> should reference the RFC. >> >> >> Thanks, >> Alissa >> _______________________________________________ >> P2PSIP mailing list >> [email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/p2psip >> <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/p2psip> > >
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