Hi David, What is the status of this?
Thanks, Alissa > On Jan 14, 2016, at 11:05 AM, Alissa Cooper <[email protected]> wrote: > > Great, thank you. > >> On Jan 14, 2016, at 10:39 AM, David Bryan <[email protected] >> <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote: >> >> Thanks for the note -- quite soon. Between end of semester, holiday travel, >> and now start of the semester there was no time, but things have cleared up >> and it is back on my list. >> >> David >> >> On Thu, Jan 14, 2016 at 10:11 AM, Alissa Cooper <[email protected] >> <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote: >> Hi David, >> >> Do you have an estimate for when this will be completed? >> >> Thanks, >> Alissa >> >>> On Nov 25, 2015, at 7:55 PM, David Bryan <[email protected] >>> <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote: >>> >>> Thank you very much for the review and comments. >>> >>> I will look over the comments, and revise shortly. >>> >>> On Nov 25, 2015 4:58 PM, "Alissa Cooper" <[email protected] >>> <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote: >>> I have reviewed this document in preparation for IETF last call. There are >>> a few edits that need to be made before this document can be last-called: >>> >>> 1) The document needs a security considerations section. It is perfectly >>> fine if this section mostly points to the security considerations of the >>> other p2psip documents, but it needs to be there. >>> >>> 2) Section 3.5 and Section 7 have text marked as “OPEN ISSUE.” These need >>> to be resolved. >>> >>> 3) Section 1 should be deleted. >>> >>> >>> While you’re making changes, please address the following: >>> >>> 4) Fix the ID nits. >>> >>> 5) I think Section 3.5 should reference RFC 6762 and 6763 rather than >>> Bonjour. >>> >>> 6) The Wikipedia references in Section 5 and 6 don’t really seem >>> appropriate and don’t add much value, so I would suggest deleting them. >>> >>> 7) References to “the RELOAD base draft” should not call it a draft and >>> should reference the RFC. >>> >>> >>> Thanks, >>> Alissa >>> _______________________________________________ >>> P2PSIP mailing list >>> [email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> >>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/p2psip >>> <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/p2psip> >> >> > > _______________________________________________ > P2PSIP mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/p2psip
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