On Fri, Apr 13, 2007 at 06:37:13PM +0200, Rafa Marin Lopez wrote: > Hi all, I did my review and the document is a good shape to me... > > only some minor comments > > 1.Introduction > > ... > > "By the virtue of enabling transport of EAP > above IP, any authentication method that can be carried as an EAP > method is made available to PANA and hence to any link-layer > technology"... > > I don't understand the conclusion in this sentence "hence to any > link-layer ..." > > Maybe it should be enough > > "By the virtue of enabling transport of EAP > above IP, any authentication method that can be carried as an EAP > method is made available to PANA".
I don't think it is enough. Your text only captures the virtue of carrying EAP, not the virtue of carrying EAP *above IP*. > > In section 4.1 > > In case of PAA is stateful... might it be possible that PAA sends nonces > in the initial PANA-Auth-Req/Resp > > >From the text > > "A Nonce AVP MUST be included in the first non-initial PANA-Auth-Request > and PANA-Auth-Answer messages, and MUST NOT be included in any other > message." > > , it seems not > > My question why it is not possible to include them in the initial > PANA-Auth-Request/Resp? If the initial PAR/PAN carries nonces, it makes PAA difficult to be stateless in the initial exchange. > > > Just the line before section 5.4 > > Key-ID AVP. ---> Key-Id AVP. OK. Thanks, Yoshihiro Ohba > > My best regards. > > > > > Alper Yegin escribió: > >PANA specification is reviewed based on the last round of AD comments > >(thanks Yoshi!). > > > >The spec is here: > > > >http://www.panasec.org/docs/editing/draft-ietf-pana-pana-15a.txt > > > >And it's diff with the version that predates last round of AD comments > >(-13): > > > >http://www.panasec.org/docs/editing/draft-ietf-pana-pana-15a-from-3.diff.htm > >l > > > >Please review the document and register your feedback by the end of April > >12, Thursday. > > > >Upon collecting and resolving any issues, the document will proceed to IETF > >last call. > > > >Thanks > > > >Alper > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > >_______________________________________________ > >Pana mailing list > >[EMAIL PROTECTED] > >https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pana > > > > > > > > > -- > ------------------------------------------------------ > Rafael Marin Lopez > Depto. Ing. de la Info. y las Comunicaciones > Faculty of Computer Science-University of Murcia > 30100 Murcia - Spain > Telf: +34968398501 e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED] > ------------------------------------------------------ > > > _______________________________________________ > Pana mailing list > [EMAIL PROTECTED] > https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pana > > _______________________________________________ Pana mailing list [EMAIL PROTECTED] https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pana
