Hi, Dhruv, Look fine to me. just a really minor comment, up to you to decide whether to update or not, :): instead of saying " an attribute called L bit ", maybe just state "L bit", coz i believe it is introduced earlier in the draft?
Cheers, Xian ________________________________________ 发件人: Dhruv Dhody 发送时间: 2015年1月13日 12:19 收件人: Zhangxian (Xian); [email protected]; [email protected] 主题: RE: [Pce] Poll on draft-dhody-pce-iro-update-02 Hi Xian, Thanks for your support and suggestion. How about these changes - OLD: The content of an IRO object is an ordered list of subobjects representing a series of abstract nodes. NEW: The content of an IRO object MUST be an ordered list of subobjects representing a series of abstract nodes. OLD: Further each subobject has an attribute called 'L bit', which is set if the subobject represents a loose hop. If the bit is not set, the subobject represents a strict hop. NEW: Further, the loose or strict property of the subobject MUST be interpreted based on an attribute called 'L bit', which is set if the subobject represents a loose hop. If the bit is not set, the subobject represents a strict hop. Regards, Dhruv > -----Original Message----- > From: Pce [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of Zhangxian (Xian) > Sent: 13 January 2015 09:09 > To: [email protected]; [email protected] > Subject: Re: [Pce] Poll on draft-dhody-pce-iro-update-02 > > Support. > > A very straightforward draft, just one suggestion: > > Should the last paragraph of Section 2 be written in RFC2119 language? > I notice the first sentence in this section uses MUST for providing > background information. Other than that, no RFC2119 language is used. > > Regards, > Xian > > -----Original Message----- > From: Pce [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of > [email protected] > Sent: 2015年1月12日 19:44 > To: [email protected] > Subject: [Pce] Poll on draft-dhody-pce-iro-update-02 > > Dear PCE WG, > > Following our previous discussions on IRO within PCEP, do you agree > with the adoption of draft-dhody-pce-iro-update-02 as a PCE WG I-D? > Please share your comments using the mailing list, justifying as much > as possible in case you are opposed. > > Thanks, > > JP & Julien > > > _____________________________________________________________________ > ____________________________________________________ > > Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations > confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc pas etre diffuses, > exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce message > par erreur, veuillez le signaler a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi > que les pieces jointes. Les messages electroniques etant susceptibles > d'alteration, Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete > altere, deforme ou falsifie. Merci. > > This message and its attachments may contain confidential or > privileged information that may be protected by law; they should not > be distributed, used or copied without authorisation. > If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender > and delete this message and its attachments. > As emails may be altered, Orange is not liable for messages that have > been modified, changed or falsified. > Thank you. > > _______________________________________________ > Pce mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce > _______________________________________________ > Pce mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce _______________________________________________ Pce mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce
