Excellent, thanks Dhruv. Let me get with the other authors and discuss. So far, I don’t see an issue. Thanks for the suggestions.
BR, Dan. -----Original Message----- From: Dhruv Dhody <dhruv.i...@gmail.com> Sent: 28 November 2018 15:16 To: Daniel King <dan...@olddog.co.uk> Cc: pce@ietf.org; Dhruv Dhody <dhruv.dh...@huawei.com> Subject: Re: [Pce] New Version Notification for draft-ietf-pce-hierarchy-extensions-06.txt Hi Daniel, As the document shepherd, I have some suggested changes that I have made directly in the text file. Most of them are editorial in nature and some fixes issues with the last update. I have a few suggestions that I have put in the text file. Diff: https://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-ietf-pce-hierarchy-extensions-06&url2=https://raw.githubusercontent.com/dhruvdhody-huawei/ietf/master/draft-ietf-pce-hierarchy-extensions-06-dd.txt Hope you found this helpful, to merge directly into your working copy. I have the shepherd report ready and we could move forward when you post an update. Also need to check with Adrian, if he is happy with the resolution of his comments. Regards, Dhruv On Mon, Nov 5, 2018 at 10:19 AM <dan...@olddog.co.uk> wrote: > > Greetings PCE'rs, > > Please find a new version of draft-ietf-pce-hierarchy-extensions (version > 06). Thanks to Adrian Farrel for his recent and thorough review, it helped > the authors polish the I-D. > > Revisions to the new version of the I-D include: > > - Updated Abstract > - Updated Introduction > - Updated Security text > - Added RFC7399 (Unanswered questions of the PCE) text and reference > to Introduction Scope > - Consistency of "Objective Functions" text > - Revised H-PCE-CAPABILITY TLV format and behavior > - Cleaned up Section 3.3.1 OF Codes > - Consistency of text and readability updates > - Added IANA allocation policy to IANA Section > - Implementation Status moved to an Appendix with statement that this > will be removed before publication > > There is one material change to protocol solution in the I-D. It is proposed > that the H-PCE-CAPABILITY TLV should now use one flag (P-bit), instead of > two. If set, will signal that the child PCE wishes to use the peer PCE as a > parent PCE: > > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-pce-hierarchy-extensions-06#pag > e-8 > > The authors will follow-up with Adrian, via the PCE list, and respond to his > specific comments in a separate email. > > BR, Dan. > > -----Original Message----- > From: internet-dra...@ietf.org <internet-dra...@ietf.org> > Sent: 05 November 2018 11:29 > To: Oscar de Dios <ogon...@tid.es>; Daniel King <dan...@olddog.co.uk>; > Fatai Zhang <zhangfa...@huawei.com>; Oscar Gonzalez de Dios > <ogon...@tid.es>; Quintin Zhao <quintin.z...@huawei.com>; > pce-cha...@ietf.org > Subject: New Version Notification for > draft-ietf-pce-hierarchy-extensions-06.txt > > > A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-pce-hierarchy-extensions-06.txt > has been successfully submitted by Daniel King and posted to the IETF > repository. > > Name: draft-ietf-pce-hierarchy-extensions > Revision: 06 > Title: Extensions to Path Computation Element Communication Protocol > (PCEP) for Hierarchical Path Computation Elements (PCE) > Document date: 2018-11-05 > Group: pce > Pages: 30 > URL: > https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-pce-hierarchy-extensions-06.txt > Status: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pce-hierarchy-extensions/ > Htmlized: > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-pce-hierarchy-extensions-06 > Htmlized: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-pce-hierarchy-extensions > Diff: > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-pce-hierarchy-extensions-06 > > Abstract: > The Hierarchical Path Computation Element (H-PCE) architecture is > defined in RFC 6805. It provides a mechanism to derive an optimum > end-to-end path in a multi-domain environment by using a hierarchical > relationship between domains to select the optimum sequence of > domains and optimum paths across those domains. > > This document defines extensions to the Path Computation Element > Protocol (PCEP) to support Hierarchical PCE procedures. > > > _______________________________________________ > Pce mailing list > Pce@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce _______________________________________________ Pce mailing list Pce@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/pce
