Can I hijack? I have taken about 5 pictures in my entire life but can
I?

On Tue, 23 Sep 2003, Dag T wrote:

> Thomas Moraitis, Sunset with Drying octopusses
> Sunsets are popular....    It is not a bad one, but in this case I miss
> something in the other end of the line.  The composition is too heavily
> concentrated on the left.  Also, I would have preferred to have the
> horizon clear below the octopuses.  One radical suggestion:  crop until
> only the line the sun, perhaps the horizon and a few octopuses remain.

When I saw it I thought "fill-in flash on the post" (hopefully
deflected to keep it soft). What would you make of this suggestion? I
don't want the detail of the octopus, but feel I am missing something
from the lamp.

Being a fellow ex-pat com-pat, this picture says a few things to me :-)

> Joseph Tainter, Notre Dame From Upstream
> I like the light in the lower part of the building, but don�t like the
> way the towers are cut.  I�d prefer either more or less.

I always have this problem when I take buildings. Assuming you go for
less, won't you lose the top of the round roof at the front? Would you
go even lower?

> Dag Thrane, Stone
> Hey, that�s me, OK, revenge is yours :-)

As I have no picture I perhaps shouldn't, but here goes: I would like
perhaps something more at the bottom to frame the foot. That's what I
hate most about my upright pictures. I am also pondering on the
possible merits of a bit more DOF to expose the hand fully (is it
motion that makes it blurred?). I get the morbid feeling here that
perhaps the stone is *behind* the hand (and perhaps the child) and
going towards it!

> Frank Theriault, The Demonstration
> Determined, but not too angry.  OK PJ shot from a demostration. The
> white jacket against all the dark ones helps a lot to the composition.

This looks to me more like a souvenir from the demonstration, rather
than a picture of it. The impression I get about the demonstration was
that it was rather sparse and too well behaved. It's a fine picture,
with an "I was there" feeling. It's just the title I am wondering
about (and thus the interpretation).

> Ann Sanfedele, Yellow chairs
> Yellow?  Nice colours ;-)  The fuzzy circle at the right bothers me,
> besides that I like these skinny chairs.

Would you align the floor with the frame of the picture? Would a
straight shot from the front be boring?

The tulip was my favourite.

Kostas (trying to learn-thanks for the commentary)

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