First, I like what you tried to do here. The main comp is ok, as a
concept. But the branches are a distraction though, and it would have
been nicer in plain B&W film instead of IR, IMHO. This would have
allowed a darker sky, maybe?, with filters I suppose. The sky is too
close to the color of the grass, some contrast would have been nice.
Try it with some nice B&W film and lose the branches, and you'll have a
great pic.
rg
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http://www.caughtinmotion.com/paw/relic-1.jpg
I'm thinking of using this for my Fair picture this year in the "Relics of Yesteryear"
catagory.(Unless i
get a good one from the Ressor 200 year family reunion next weekend).:-)
For the most part i have taken what would be standard shots of old farm equipment or
cars.Usually get
a placing but i'm trying to get better / different shots for this catagory.
I am trying to show (and it may be obvious) that the country is being over run by the push
of
urbanization,with this shot.
I found this near our office,were the toll Hwy No. 407 runs through what used to be 2
lovely equestrian
facilities in Thornhill Ontario.
Any comments on artistic merits are welcome. Actually, any comments are.LOL
As always,enjoy and thanks for looking.
Dave Brooks
