I think the picture might be a lot better if the "dots" were closer to the trees. If you had moved up, you would have lost the trees framing the dog and man, or at least pushed them to the frame edges. Getting closer probably would not have helped.
Shel Belinkoff wrote:
Hello Boris ...
This is a mediocre photo of apartment buildings as seen thru some trees. The subjects that you what to feature are too distant to add anything to
the composition. ......snip
