Patrick wrote: > Shot this in April during EU accessing celebrations in Malta. > > http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=2761425 > > thanks for comments - critique welcome
my unsophisticated amateur opinion... Nice shot. You've got what looks like multiple-exposure on one axis that describes the motion of bowing a violin (a start-stop motion) and a standard motion blue on another axis, and you've got points of interest at opposing corners with little between. The dark shirt provides the middle void but is still a complete image. A pleasing unbalanced framing, but the cropping is a bit too uniform. My only other critique would be that the face is blurred but not enough to really imply motion like the rest of the image. Amy
