In a message dated 3/10/2005 6:27:18 AM Pacific Standard Time, 
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http://home.earthlink.net/~my-pics/norcal/carmen.html

Gotta work on focusing accuracy with that istD .... 

This was, I believe, with the K85/1.8, aperture @ 5.6
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Looks like a Shel shot. I think you're getting it. I like the girl in back 
leaning down to pick up bread off water. I think I might crop the top a bit 
more 
or tone down the highlights there a bit more -- it's a little bright, a 
little busy, grabs the eye too much away from the girls in front.

Is that the kind of critique you want? ;-)

Marnie 

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