G'day Shel,

I like the layers of the composition (ie. grass, bench, path, water,
trees & sky) & the feel of the shot, but I find the colours over
saturated.

I don't know if this is intentional on your part or as a result of
your recent monitor problems but I think it looks better with more
muted / subdued colours.

I'd also recommend cropping off about half the grass.

Dave

On 8/3/05, Shel Belinkoff <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> http://home.earthlink.net/~pdml-pics/ji-20.html
> 
> Taken late one afternoon during a stroll through Golden Gate Park in San
> Francisco.
> 
> Pentax ME Super, M35/2.8
> 
> Shel
> 
> 
>

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