Hi Bruce ... This doesn't do much for me either. The first thing that I noticed is that the right part (the "bow") of the submarine has been truncated rather abruptly. I think I'd like the pic better if the gradual taper could be seen in its entirety. The almost monochromatic look leaves me feeling a little cool as well. Perhaps just moving the image completely to greyscale would be an improvement. Y'know, I almost hate to say this, but I'm going to anyway - it reminds me of the kind of photo one would find in an office building, the neutral space fillers that are in lobbies, hallways, meeting rooms. By that i mean it may be a very salable piece because of its neutrality. I'm not sure if that's a compliment or not, but that was my first reaction when it came up on the screen here.
Shel > [Original Message] > From: Bruce Dayton > > This is the last shot of Valley of the Gods that might be worth > showing. Since you all have been kind enough to give me your feelings > on "The Pyramid", hopefully you will do so here. > > This shot uses the haze as a way to convey shapes and distances. Let > me know what you think. > > http://www.daytonphoto.com/PAW/monumentvalley_0479a.htm
