Hello Boris ...

This is very similar to one of my recent photos, so naturally I like the
idea ;-))

Unfortunately, the framing or cropping leaves something to be desired.  The
angle of the bench lessens the impact of the photo and creates an unneeded
and unwelcome tension in what would have been a more tranquil and relaxed
scene.  The position of the woman on the bench is a bit odd.  I don't think
I'd have made the exposure at the moment you did.

It's also possible that the scene could have been photographed without the
woman in it - just the bench and the lake scene. It might have been a
worthwhile exposure just to see.

When making photos such as this it's sometimes a good idea to make numerous
exposures.  Little things in the scene which may go unnoticed while
photographing can sometimes make a big difference in the results.

Shel 


> [Original Message]
> From: Boris Liberman 

> http://www.photosight.ru/photo.php?photoid=1005522&ref=author
>
> Wonder what you have to say.
>
> Boris


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