I should probably keep my mouth shut since, for the most part, I seem to be
way out of step with the rest of those who've commented on this photo. But,
being a fool and having just taken some pain medication, I'm gonna jump
right in.
 
I don't like it the way it is. 
 
First, there's a shiny spot on the tip of her nose - two actually. IMO,
they should be brought down some. Her cheek below her left eye is a bit
hot. That, too, might benefit from being toned down somewhat.
 
The photo appears overly sharp and, IMO, could benefit from a little softer
look. The sharp detail of her pores does little to enhance or add to what
could be a very fine image. The wisps of hair that are over her left eye
appear overly sharpened. There seems to be some halos around a few strands. 
 
Just curious, Bill, what sharpening technique did you use?
 
Well, there y'have it. 
 
Shel 
"You meet the nicest people with a Pentax" 
 
 
 
> On 12/9/05, William Robb wrote:
 
> > http://users.accesscomm.ca/wrobb/pictures/portraits/IMGP0146.html
 

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