I agree with Bruce completely. Thanks, Bruce, for saving me the typing process. I'd add that the tonality of the hands seems quite pale - a little darker and a little sharper might also enhance this photo.
Shel > [Original Message] > From: Bruce Dayton > I think this one needs two things. More DOF - probably need more > light or a tripod or both. Also, it seems that it would be nice to > very easily realize one hand is yours and one is hers. Perhaps a > different pose that would clearly indicate - like two left or right > hands or difference of clothing or something. As is, your hand is > hidden enough by hers that along with shallow dof, it is not readily > apparent that there are two of you. Maybe even both of her hands > holding one of yours or vice versa. > > Anyway, I really like the idea, but it needs some more work to make a > truly great shot - certainly has the makings for it. > http://members.aol.com/eactivist/PAWS/pages/together.htm
