I agree as well. Remember that as you increase DOF, you'll want to make your
background more distant or at least very clean.
Paul
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From: "Shel Belinkoff" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
> I agree with Bruce completely. Thanks, Bruce, for saving me the typing
> process. I'd add that the tonality of the hands seems quite pale - a
> little darker and a little sharper might also enhance this photo.
>
> Shel
>
>
> > [Original Message]
> > From: Bruce Dayton
>
> > I think this one needs two things. More DOF - probably need more
> > light or a tripod or both. Also, it seems that it would be nice to
> > very easily realize one hand is yours and one is hers. Perhaps a
> > different pose that would clearly indicate - like two left or right
> > hands or difference of clothing or something. As is, your hand is
> > hidden enough by hers that along with shallow dof, it is not readily
> > apparent that there are two of you. Maybe even both of her hands
> > holding one of yours or vice versa.
> >
> > Anyway, I really like the idea, but it needs some more work to make a
> > truly great shot - certainly has the makings for it.
>
> > http://members.aol.com/eactivist/PAWS/pages/together.htm
>
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