Hi Paul,

The entire photo looks over exposed to me.  It's also too "busy" and the
blown out chairs are a real distraction.  As a "slice of life" it just
doesn't cut it for me, on any level.  A much tighter crop on the woman
viewing the computer screen and the bear looking over her shoulder, would
make for a much stronger photo.  There's too much useless space on the
viewer's left side of the pic.

Shel



> [Original Message]
> From: Paul Stenquist 

> Pooh wants in. FA 50/1.4 on the *istD. f2.4 @ 1/20th. Handheld of 
> course.
> http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=4058489&size=lg


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