Hi Paul,

 
The entire photo looks over exposed to me. It's also too "busy" and the
blown out chairs are a real distraction. As a "slice of life" it just
doesn't cut it for me, on any level. A much tighter crop on the woman
viewing the computer screen and the bear looking over her shoulder, would
make for a much stronger photo. There's too much useless space on the
viewer's left side of the pic.

 
Shel
 
 
 
> [Original Message]
> From: Paul Stenquist 
 
> Pooh wants in. FA 50/1.4 on the *istD. f2.4 @ 1/20th. Handheld of 
> course.
> http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=4058489&size=lg
 

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