I gave a comparative response.  I didn't like the first one very much
because I thought the manipulation looked very odd and fake.  The
second looks much better.

You came across wanting a critique on the manipulation, rather than
the picture as a whole.  You've already indicated that you are rather
so-so on this one.

As to the second shot, I can see a line coming across from the left
that looks like a film scratch.  There are a bunch of dust spots that
should be cleaned up (boy I remember dealing with that from scans!).
The image for me is medium - not great, but not a stinker.  If there
were more detail to be had in the background...

-- 
Bruce


Monday, July 10, 2006, 11:25:51 AM, you wrote:

JD> Bruce, I don't wish to try to talk you out of liking any of my shots,
JD> but IMO the sun in itself adds absolutely nothing to the scene. Only
JD> emphasizes the hole in the branches.

JD> Thanks for positive remarks, however.

JD> Jack


JD> --- Bruce Dayton <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:

>> Personally, I like this version much better.
>> 
>> -- 
>> Best regards,
>> Bruce
>> 
>> 
>> Monday, July 10, 2006, 10:33:01 AM, you wrote:
>> 
>> JD> No. Manipulation (& Velvia) = Lack of integrity?
>> 
>> JD> OK Tom, here is the Sun Shadow-less. About a C-.(?)
>> 
>> JD> Jack
>> 
>> JD> http://photolightimages.com/aspupload/detail.asp?ID=127
>> 
>> JD> --- Tom C <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
>> 
>> >> >My point in putting it up was largely about the integrity of
>> >> >manipulation.
>> >> >
>> >> >Jack
>> >> > > > http://photolightimages.com/aspupload/detail.asp?ID=121
>> >> > >
>> >> >
>> >> 
>> >> Manipulation = Integrity?
>> >> 
>> >> You find this acceptable but belly-ache about Velvia?? :-)
>> >> 
>> >> Actually I like it. Would like to see it without the manipulation
>> >> too.  
>> >> Certainly a moody image which I like.
>> >> 
>> >> Tom C.
>> >> 
>> >> 
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