I think I understand what you're trying to do with this one, but, imo, it
misses the mark (as i see the mark to be).  I believe the photo could be
stronger with a different (or even non-existent) title, as the title has
led me to some expectations.  It's nicely done from a technical point,
that's for certain.

Shel



> [Original Message]
> From: Bruce Dayton 

> http://www.daytonphoto.com/PAW/bkd_4227.htm



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