Thanks for all the comments ... I did some localized adjustments to the tonal curves on faces and details, added a little blur to the upper portion of the background, etc. Can't do much about the cropping as that's about all I could get in given all the foliage and other junk that surrounded everything in this little 'zoo'. And with an ultrawide lens too... !
If you have the moment, please take another look. :-) http://homepage.mac.com/ramarren/photo/PAW7/07.htm Godfrey --- > Well composed, but the busy background detracts. Of course that's > what was there, but, nevertheless, it brings it down a notch IMO. --- > I like this one a lot but would be happier if you could try to > lighten just > the faces a bit. --- > I was going to say it looks like a good silloette, but i'd probably > mis spell it, so i won't --- > The subject is today's winner of the "Stranger Than > Fiction" award. > > The photo needs more detail in the figures. Not that > I know how to get it there; the only statue of Charles > Dickens in North America is a block away, and while > very nice to look at, its dark bronze has been > impossible to photograph well. --- > How do I join this band?? ;-) > > I would prefer a bit more space to the left - the most distant > 'musician' needs more room in front of him. --- > Cool photo Godfrey! Yes, I'd prefer a touch more > space all around I think... but of course I don't know > what you cropped out. --- > Lovely wide angle feel; 21mm really is plenty if one has an eye. > I'd like more detail in the drummer's face, though. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net
