Marnie, Nicely seen! Like it. Am going to pick a couple of knits, one of which you may not be able to do anything about. Not simply because it's often quoted as a compositional rule, but because it gave me a slight negative nudge. The horizon is uncomfortably close to mid image. I would definitely drop it. The other is that the left border interferes with building. If you have the option of allowing a slight bit more of the left side, might consider it.
Jack --- [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote: > I was up last Saturday at Napa for a non-photography reason. Very > white sky > day, overcast and foggy and drizzly. I prefer to keep my equipment > dry, but > on the way out of town the rain stopped for a while. So I pulled > over down a > private road toward a vineyard and took some shots. I didn't go any > closer to > things because there were quite a few no trespassing signs posted. > The vines > themselves were all empty, no vines, just posts waiting for vines. > > I sort of liked this, however. I like how in farm country you will > see a > line of trees and it will not only be a line of trees, but trees, a > road, and > farm houses (and barns). I suppose in farm country they do that to > save > building on cultivable land -- to keep the land clear as much as > possible. > > I wasn't sure this was worth it so I showed it to Bruce Dayton > first, and he > suggested I crop it like a pano and convert it to B&W, and do a few > other > things. Which I have done. Since it's a bigger file than I show > normally, it > may take a bit longer to load. I also didn't add any extra > sharpening because I > didn't feel it needed it. > > http://members.aol.com/eactivist/PAWS/pages/row.htm > > Still not sure if it is worth it, so I'd appreciate reactions. > > Technical Info: DS, A 35-105, 1/180, f/8, 400 ISO. > > I must admit it's fun to be able now to throw up technical info. -- > this > photo is among the first group of shots that I have shot with the DS > (and the A > 35-105). > > Marnie aka Doe :-) > > <BR><BR><BR>**************************************<BR> AOL now offers > free > email to everyone. Find out more about what's free from AOL at > http://www.aol.com. > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > ____________________________________________________________________________________ Yahoo! Music Unlimited Access over 1 million songs. http://music.yahoo.com/unlimited -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net
