I disagree. Without the people it's just another shot of waves breaking on the 
shore. the people on the bench give it reason to live. A bit of juxtaposition.
Paul
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From: "William Robb" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
> 
> ----- Original Message ----- 
> From: "Bruce Dayton"
> Subject: PESO - Untitled
> 
> 
> > Shot at Land's End on the San Francisco peninsula.
> >
> > Pentax K10D, DA* 50-135/2.8 @ 123mm
> > ISO 400, 1/350 sec @ f/11, Handheld
> >
> > http://www.daytonphoto.com/PAW/bkd_5550bw.htm
> 
> Personally, I think you blew it.
> The people in the forground add nothing to the composition, but they did
> cause you to cut the rocks off.
> Sorry.
> The shot would be much more interesting if you had arranged the composition
> to put the rocks where the people are, presuming that there isn't a hotel
> right behind the rocks.
> The fix doesn't cut it either, the forground is the problem, not the 
> solution.
> 
> William Robb
> 
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