Subash, you have some very interesting images there. The one suggestion
I can think of is more attention to details.
One detail that did bother me was the man in the boat - needing either a
fill card or a very, very weak flash. The church, the boilers and the
the boat would be my faves. The boilers could also work without the boat
and the wires.
The sunsets are good moments but I'd change their framing - the horizon
is too close to the middle for my taste, and the one with the fishing
net could possibly benefit from a slightly different position. I also
liked the song, but the person in the foreground is sort of blending to
the ones standing in front of him - standing just a little to the left
would probably place him against the lighted floor. As they are, very
interesting images that could (for my taste) be even better with minor
changes. As I say that, it's not easy to compose a "grabshot", and we
often have just one shot before we are noticed and the mood spoiled. But
if you have the chance, move a little and shoot again. ;-)
Please post more!
LF
Subash escreveu:
On Sat, 17 Jan 2009 09:58:12 -0600
"Christine Aguila" <[email protected]> wrote:
Hi Subash: I agree with what William Robb said, but keep posting
your shots from your recent trip. I'd love to see them. Why don't
you put a GESO together. Cheers, Christine
http://picasaweb.google.com/pdml.live/Peso#5292119179876878786
hi Christine, thanks for looking and the comments. appreciate it. i did
in fact put together a collection of photos for friends here in India.
some of the captions may have local allusions which may not make much
sense to you, but it shouldn't be a serious problem. ;-) it is rather
big (25 photos), but would love to hear what you think.
http://jeyan.jalbum.net/Kerala/
regards, subash
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