Luiz, really appreciate your detailed suggestions. i won't get a second chance with these subjects for quite some time but i will definitely keep them in mind in future. thanks again.
regards, subash On Sat, 17 Jan 2009 16:15:40 -0300 Luiz Felipe <[email protected]> wrote: > Subash, you have some very interesting images there. The one > suggestion I can think of is more attention to details. > > One detail that did bother me was the man in the boat - needing > either a fill card or a very, very weak flash. The church, the > boilers and the the boat would be my faves. The boilers could also > work without the boat and the wires. > > The sunsets are good moments but I'd change their framing - the > horizon is too close to the middle for my taste, and the one with the > fishing net could possibly benefit from a slightly different > position. I also liked the song, but the person in the foreground is > sort of blending to the ones standing in front of him - standing just > a little to the left would probably place him against the lighted > floor. As they are, very interesting images that could (for my taste) > be even better with minor changes. As I say that, it's not easy to > compose a "grabshot", and we often have just one shot before we are > noticed and the mood spoiled. But if you have the chance, move a > little and shoot again. ;-) > > Please post more! -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
