In a message dated 4/1/2009 12:53:31 A.M. Pacific Daylight Time, [email protected] writes: I think you've missed the composition a bit there - it doesn't really cohere properly. Rather than cloning the thing out you might consider a different crop. I would start with a double square and place the horizon line right along the middle of the frame, then kind of muck around a bit until it felt right or I got bored.
Bob ============ Thanks to all who looked and commented. I think got the most divergent opinions on this photo than any I have shown in some time. I agree, Bob. Composition is not quite there. It was much harder getting one that direction, no foreground elements. So I went back and looked at what I had and came up with this. Same basic shot, same basic direction, but in it the center it sort of "rays out." What do you think? Better? Slightly better? http://www.mapphotography.com/PAWS/pages/duck2b.htm Original http://www.mapphotography.com/PAWS/pages/duck2.htm Anyone else who wants to chime in too, feel free. Marnie aka Doe --------------------------------------------- Warning: I am now filtering my email, so you may be censored. **************Worried about job security? Check out the 5 safest jobs in a recession. (http://jobs.aol.com/gallery/growing-job-industries?ncid=emlcntuscare00000003) -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
