What do you think? Better? Slightly better?
Not much. Still too much foreground water !
Kenneth Waller
http://www.tinyurl.com/272u2f
----- Original Message -----
From: <[email protected]>
Subject: Re: PESO - Duck Train (version b)
In a message dated 4/1/2009 12:53:31 A.M. Pacific Daylight Time,
[email protected] writes:
I think you've missed the composition a bit there - it doesn't really
cohere
properly. Rather than cloning the thing out you might consider a
different
crop. I would start with a double square and place the horizon line right
along the middle of the frame, then kind of muck around a bit until it
felt
right or I got bored.
Bob
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Thanks to all who looked and commented.
I think got the most divergent opinions on this photo than any I have
shown
in some time.
I agree, Bob. Composition is not quite there. It was much harder getting
one
that direction, no foreground elements.
So I went back and looked at what I had and came up with this. Same basic
shot, same basic direction, but in it the center it sort of "rays out."
What do you think? Better? Slightly better?
http://www.mapphotography.com/PAWS/pages/duck2b.htm
Original
http://www.mapphotography.com/PAWS/pages/duck2.htm
Anyone else who wants to chime in too, feel free.
Marnie aka Doe
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