> I think you've missed the  composition a bit there - it 
> doesn't really cohere
> properly. Rather than  cloning the thing out you might 
> consider a different
> crop. I would start with  a double square and place the 
> horizon line right
> along the middle of the  frame, then kind of muck around a 
> bit until it felt
> right or I got  bored.
> 
> Bob
> 
> ============
> 
> Thanks to all who looked and  commented.
> 
> I think got the most divergent opinions on this photo than 
> any  I have shown 
> in some time.
> 
> I agree, Bob. Composition is not quite there.  It was much 
> harder getting one 
> that direction, no foreground elements.
> 
> So  I went back and looked at what I had and came up with 
> this. Same basic 
> shot,  same basic direction, but in it the center it sort of 
> "rays out."
> 
> What do  you think? Better? Slightly  better?
> 
> http://www.mapphotography.com/PAWS/pages/duck2b.htm
> 

Perfect.

Bob


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