Hmmm..I get it, Boris. I'd try moving the right edge (if possible) so as not to 
cut well into that tree trunk. Closes up the right side.
Anything that would increase contrast between the flax colored grass and the 
greener undergrowth would help. Yes, I have the proverbial 'flare for the 
obvious.' Maybe punch up the yellow and reduce the green??
Like the overall tone.

Jack


--- On Thu, 4/9/09, Boris Liberman <[email protected]> wrote:

> From: Boris Liberman <[email protected]>
> Subject: PESO #013 - "Under the olive trees"
> To: "Pentax-Discuss Mail List" <[email protected]>
> Date: Thursday, April 9, 2009, 9:53 AM
> Hi!
> 
> Please be brutal and honest, as I've already processed
> this image in 3 different ways, and I am not sure I am
> finished with it yet.
> 
> http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2009/04/peso-2009-013.html
> 
> Warning: full image is 250 kb and 1024 pixels across.
> 
> Thanks.
> 
> Boris
> 
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