On Thu, Apr 9, 2009 at 12:53 PM, Boris Liberman <[email protected]> wrote: > Hi! > > Please be brutal and honest, as I've already processed this image in 3 > different ways, and I am not sure I am finished with it yet. > > http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2009/04/peso-2009-013.html > > Warning: full image is 250 kb and 1024 pixels across. >
I've looked at this a number of times, but there was something vaguely unsatisfying about it - couldn't put my finger on why, there was just something missing. Then I looked at Paul's reworking of it and it made all the difference! I think yours is just too "flat". The extra punch really shows off the composition - it separates the trees from the grass and the blowing grass from the rest of the grass and makes it all work. cheers, frank -- "Sharpness is a bourgeois concept." -Henri Cartier-Bresson -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
