I looked at number 2 again on my calibrated monitor, and it looks good. (I had previously viewed at on my laptop, where screen angle determines brightness.) I believe there is more petal detail in number one, but number two hasn't reached the highlight level that I would conisder "blown out," and it certainly has more visual snap. I like the redo.
Paul
On Jun 9, 2009, at 2:41 AM, AlunFoto wrote:

Jack,
Blown highlights may be an issue with your monitor. I've never checked
as many white spots for RGB values before, to be sure nothing was
blown. :-)

Jostein

2009/6/8  <[email protected]>:


Background much improved. However, the blown out white petals detract greatly.

Jack

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From: AlunFoto <[email protected]>
Subject: PESO - Lingonberry flowers take 2
To: "Pentax-Discuss Mail List" <[email protected]>
Date: Monday, June 8, 2009, 1:20 PM
As according to suggestions from Ken
and Igor, I've manicured the
bokeh and glossed the contrast. :-)
http://www.alunfoto.no/galleri/displayimage.php?pos=-220

Any comments on this version vs. the first are much
appreciated.

The first is here: http://alunfoto.blogspot.com/2009/06/lingonberry-flower.html

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