From: "Christine Aguila"
Hi Everyone:
Despite the ugly light today (cold & overcast), I did some construction
shooting today. The progress thus far is AMAZING. There's text below each
picture. It's late here, & I'm listening to The Who--so whoooooo are you,
hoo, hoo--hoo, hoo :-) .
http://www.caguila.com/caguila/upramp2/
Comments welcome,
cheers, Christine
Based on the caption, it seems to me your purpose in the first image is
to show how close the building is to completion, specifically "The 7th
floor is nearly finished,".
But the most prominent feature in the image is the parking deck.
Looking at the image, after the bright sky, my eye is drawn to the
worker on the ground, then up the ladder to the other worker. I have to
force myself to follow the diagonal of the parking garage to find the
building in the image.
I don't know the site, so I can't tell if you would have access - but I
think your purpose would be better served if you could have shot from
somewhere off to the left of your frame, putting more of the building
into the frame and using parallax to move the crane that "will come down
Jan 25th." above the building itself.
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