Great subject & decent light, but the space between the LH tree and the LH
edge is bothersome to me. Given the confines you had to put up with I'd
probably crop out that space & include what ever remains of the tree.
For me the interest in this shot is mostly the shape of the barn & the
brightly lit barn wood features.
Good eye !
Kenneth Waller
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----- Original Message -----
From: "P N Stenquist" <[email protected]>
Subject: Re: PESO: Bogue Barn
I like it cropped like this. Definitely a worthy subject, nicely rendered.
My first instinct was to say that you ought to crop into the barn a bit
on the left as well, but then you'd lose that tree. So I think you
handled it just right.
Paul
On Mar 13, 2010, at 1:06 PM, Jack Davis wrote:
On my way home from taking care of an errand, I took a street (Bogue Rd)
I hadn't been on for some years. I recorded this east facing barn and,
early this AM, returned with some gear.
It's sits on an island of property surrounded by apartments and other
commercial structures. Had to shoot through what we call a cyclone fence
which resulted in my needing to heavily crop. Wanted to include the
entire barn, but wasn't possible.
Without a lot of enthusiasm, am offering a portion. Love the detail in
the orig file. I have a bit of a problem with the barn peak/large tree
weight so near the center, but WTH, I had a brief moment with a camera.
Jack
Comments always welcome.
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