Jack, I was suggesting eliminating the space between the tree and the LH edge, not the tree.

Kenneth Waller
http://www.tinyurl.com/272u2f

----- Original Message ----- From: "Jack Davis" <[email protected]>
Subject: Re: PESO: Bogue Barn


Thanks, Ken. Inclusion of the far tree is a must! The crop is a bit for my comfort as it is. If I were to change anything it would be to push back the right edge a little.

Jack

--- On Sun, 3/14/10, Ken Waller <[email protected]> wrote:

From: Ken Waller <[email protected]>
Subject: Re: PESO: Bogue Barn
To: "Pentax-Discuss Mail List" <[email protected]>
Date: Sunday, March 14, 2010, 2:25 PM
Great subject & decent light, but
the space between the LH tree and the LH edge is bothersome
to me. Given the confines you had to put up with I'd
probably crop out that space & include what ever remains
of the tree.
For me the interest in this shot is mostly the shape of the
barn & the brightly lit barn wood features.

Good eye !

Kenneth Waller
http://www.tinyurl.com/272u2f

----- Original Message ----- From: "P N Stenquist" <[email protected]>
Subject: Re: PESO: Bogue Barn


> I like it cropped like this. Definitely a worthy
subject, nicely rendered.
>
> My first instinct was to say that you ought to crop
into the barn a bit on the left as well, but then
you'd lose that tree. So I think you handled it just right.
>
> Paul
> On Mar 13, 2010, at 1:06 PM, Jack Davis wrote:
>
>> On my way home from taking care of an errand, I
took a street (Bogue Rd) I hadn't been on for some
years. I recorded this east facing barn and, early
this AM, returned with some gear.
>> It's sits on an island of property surrounded by
apartments and other commercial structures. Had to
shoot through what we call a cyclone fence which
resulted in my needing to heavily crop. Wanted to
include the entire barn, but wasn't possible.
>> Without a lot of enthusiasm, am offering a
portion. Love the detail in the orig file. I have a
bit of a problem with the barn peak/large tree weight
so near the center, but WTH, I had a brief moment with
a camera.
>>
>> Jack
>>
>> Comments always welcome.
>>
>> K20, DA 16~45, hand held
>>
>> http://photolightimages.com/aspupload/detail.asp?ID=462


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