I really see no room between the base of the tree and the frame edge. As I read your first post, you suggested I remove the space between the edge and the tree and leave "whatever remains of the tree." For me, it's uncomfortably close as is. As I would guess you are aware, if any element of an image is close to the frame edge it tends to "connect." Thanks for commenting.
Jack --- On Sun, 3/14/10, Ken Waller <[email protected]> wrote: > From: Ken Waller <[email protected]> > Subject: Re: PESO: Bogue Barn > To: "Pentax-Discuss Mail List" <[email protected]> > Date: Sunday, March 14, 2010, 3:39 PM > Jack, I was suggesting eliminating > the space between the tree and the LH edge, not the tree. > > Kenneth Waller > http://www.tinyurl.com/272u2f > > ----- Original Message ----- From: "Jack Davis" <[email protected]> > Subject: Re: PESO: Bogue Barn > > > Thanks, Ken. Inclusion of the far tree is a must! The crop > is a bit for my comfort as it is. If I were to change > anything it would be to push back the right edge a little. > > Jack > > --- On Sun, 3/14/10, Ken Waller <[email protected]> > wrote: > > > From: Ken Waller <[email protected]> > > Subject: Re: PESO: Bogue Barn > > To: "Pentax-Discuss Mail List" <[email protected]> > > Date: Sunday, March 14, 2010, 2:25 PM > > Great subject & decent light, but > > the space between the LH tree and the LH edge is > bothersome > > to me. Given the confines you had to put up with I'd > > probably crop out that space & include what ever > remains > > of the tree. > > For me the interest in this shot is mostly the shape > of the > > barn & the brightly lit barn wood features. > > > > Good eye ! > > > > Kenneth Waller > > http://www.tinyurl.com/272u2f > > > > ----- Original Message ----- From: "P N Stenquist" > <[email protected]> > > Subject: Re: PESO: Bogue Barn > > > > > > > I like it cropped like this. Definitely a worthy > > subject, nicely rendered. > > > > > > My first instinct was to say that you ought to > crop > > into the barn a bit on the left as well, but then > > you'd lose that tree. So I think you handled it just > right. > > > > > > Paul > > > On Mar 13, 2010, at 1:06 PM, Jack Davis wrote: > > > > > >> On my way home from taking care of an errand, > I > > took a street (Bogue Rd) I hadn't been on for some > > years. I recorded this east facing barn and, early > > this AM, returned with some gear. > > >> It's sits on an island of property surrounded > by > > apartments and other commercial structures. Had to > > shoot through what we call a cyclone fence which > > resulted in my needing to heavily crop. Wanted to > > include the entire barn, but wasn't possible. > > >> Without a lot of enthusiasm, am offering a > > portion. Love the detail in the orig file. I have a > > bit of a problem with the barn peak/large tree weight > > so near the center, but WTH, I had a brief moment > with > > a camera. > > >> > > >> Jack > > >> > > >> Comments always welcome. > > >> > > >> K20, DA 16~45, hand held > > >> > > >> http://photolightimages.com/aspupload/detail.asp?ID=462 > > > > > > -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > > [email protected] > > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link > > directly above and follow the directions. > > > > > > > > -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link > directly above and follow the directions. > > -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link > directly above and follow the directions. > -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
