I'd like it better if her head wasn't dead center in the frame. Since she's looking to the right, I'd crop off the left side of the frame to about her hair, or have more negative space to the right to balance it out. You've got nice texture and color in the background, so it's not like you'd have a flat tone that looks boring.
The lighting is nice and soft, and overall it's a nice picture, if a little bit soft (focus-wise) on her face. On Sat, Mar 27, 2010 at 4:23 PM, Daniel J. Matyola <[email protected]> wrote: > http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=10850670&size=md > > Comments, Criticisms and suggestions welcome. > > Dan M > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow > the directions. > -- Aloha Photographer Photoblog http://alohaphotog.blogspot.com/ -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
