On 4/12/2011 03:07, Sasha Sobol wrote:
http://www.flickriver.com/photos/sobol/sets/72157626354271149/
or
http://www.flickr.com/photos/sobol/sets/72157626354271149/detail/
or links to individual photos:
http://www.flickr.com/photos/sobol/5609217398/in/set-72157626354271149/lightbox
http://www.flickr.com/photos/sobol/5609184676/in/set-72157626354271149/lightbox
http://www.flickr.com/photos/sobol/5609123412/in/set-72157626354271149/lightbox
Please tell me what you think.
--Sasha
Sasha, I am thinking that if you cropped the second image similarly (in
geometric sense) to the first one, the continuity between the two would
be stronger and they would really work as a pair. As it is, the second
image strikes me as the weakest link.
In the third image, I am thinking that including the tattoo on her left
hand in its entirety would add the intrigue or conflict between her
looks and whatever is engraved in her skin. Yet I think this is the
strongest image of the series.
And the first image - it surely works, but it almost begs for
continuation whereas the second image is unfinished and thus spoils the
viewer's fun a little.
All in all - you did great but please bear with my remarks nonetheless.
Boris trying to be brutally honest and politely constructive.
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