Thanks Boris, brutal and honest - is exactly what I need. --S On Mon, Apr 11, 2011 at 10:20 PM, Boris Liberman <[email protected]> wrote: > On 4/12/2011 03:07, Sasha Sobol wrote: >> >> http://www.flickriver.com/photos/sobol/sets/72157626354271149/ >> or >> http://www.flickr.com/photos/sobol/sets/72157626354271149/detail/ >> >> or links to individual photos: >> >> http://www.flickr.com/photos/sobol/5609217398/in/set-72157626354271149/lightbox >> >> http://www.flickr.com/photos/sobol/5609184676/in/set-72157626354271149/lightbox >> >> http://www.flickr.com/photos/sobol/5609123412/in/set-72157626354271149/lightbox >> >> Please tell me what you think. >> >> --Sasha >> > > Sasha, I am thinking that if you cropped the second image similarly (in > geometric sense) to the first one, the continuity between the two would be > stronger and they would really work as a pair. As it is, the second image > strikes me as the weakest link. > > In the third image, I am thinking that including the tattoo on her left hand > in its entirety would add the intrigue or conflict between her looks and > whatever is engraved in her skin. Yet I think this is the strongest image of > the series. > > And the first image - it surely works, but it almost begs for continuation > whereas the second image is unfinished and thus spoils the viewer's fun a > little. > > All in all - you did great but please bear with my remarks nonetheless. > > Boris trying to be brutally honest and politely constructive. > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and > follow the directions. >
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