Added another photo to the set: http://www.flickr.com/photos/sobol/5612588484/in/photostream/lightbox
--S On Mon, Apr 11, 2011 at 10:26 PM, Sasha Sobol <[email protected]> wrote: > Thanks Boris, brutal and honest - is exactly what I need. > --S > > On Mon, Apr 11, 2011 at 10:20 PM, Boris Liberman <[email protected]> wrote: >> On 4/12/2011 03:07, Sasha Sobol wrote: >>> >>> http://www.flickriver.com/photos/sobol/sets/72157626354271149/ >>> or >>> http://www.flickr.com/photos/sobol/sets/72157626354271149/detail/ >>> >>> or links to individual photos: >>> >>> http://www.flickr.com/photos/sobol/5609217398/in/set-72157626354271149/lightbox >>> >>> http://www.flickr.com/photos/sobol/5609184676/in/set-72157626354271149/lightbox >>> >>> http://www.flickr.com/photos/sobol/5609123412/in/set-72157626354271149/lightbox >>> >>> Please tell me what you think. >>> >>> --Sasha >>> >> >> Sasha, I am thinking that if you cropped the second image similarly (in >> geometric sense) to the first one, the continuity between the two would be >> stronger and they would really work as a pair. As it is, the second image >> strikes me as the weakest link. >> >> In the third image, I am thinking that including the tattoo on her left hand >> in its entirety would add the intrigue or conflict between her looks and >> whatever is engraved in her skin. Yet I think this is the strongest image of >> the series. >> >> And the first image - it surely works, but it almost begs for continuation >> whereas the second image is unfinished and thus spoils the viewer's fun a >> little. >> >> All in all - you did great but please bear with my remarks nonetheless. >> >> Boris trying to be brutally honest and politely constructive. >> >> -- >> PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List >> [email protected] >> http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net >> to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and >> follow the directions. >> > -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
