I like how you've included the tall grass blades on the left and set the iris 
somewhat off center to the right. The background water reflection is nice, but 
the very dark upper area is a little distracting. Maybe it can be lightened a 
bit.(?)

Jack 

--- On Wed, 5/18/11, Daniel J. Matyola <[email protected]> wrote:

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