On Sun, Jan 15, 2012 at 10:09 PM, Larry Colen <[email protected]> wrote:
>
> On Jan 15, 2012, at 6:41 PM, Bruce Walker wrote:
>
>> Additional shots from my shoot with the shy and reluctant "I look
>> terrible in photos" Marzi last week ...
>
> Tell Marzi that in my professional opinion as a photographer she is 
> overflowing with hawtness. It's possible that has to do with your skill as a 
> photographer, but I suspect not.
>
> As a guy, my opinion would probably just make her blush.

Unsure whether I should pass that along. ;-)


>>
>> http://goo.gl/hrPwz
>>
>> From left to right:
>> - "Once upon a time in the west"
>
> Very nice, the shadows add mystery.  I'm not sure what the thing that looks 
> like a goldfish cookie on a leather thong is,  I'd use my adjustment brush 
> and "burn it to black" dropping the exposure and brightness.  I'd also like 
> to see it cropped in a lot tighter on her. as much as you can off the left, 
> and bottom.  For that matter, I might even crop off a bit of the hat in the 
> upper right.

Yeah, I could see a square crop for this  that would do pretty-much
what you're suggesting.

Were I to reshoot this though, I'd include a barely illuminated
backdrop/background to give her outline definition. Mystery is nice,
but I'm afraid it tends toward gloom territory here.


>> - "Madame X"
>
> Madme X is interesting.  It almost looks overprocessed, but that ends up also 
> almost making it look like a 1940's glamour shot. If it looked any more 40's 
> I'd be wondering where the cigarette with curling smoke was.  I like the way 
> that it lookes like you played with varying levels of saturation too.

I forgot to warn folks that this one is intentionally *way*
overprocessed. I used Portraiture settings that amount to cranking all
the smoothing sliders to 11. And I desaturated it a fair amount too. I
was aiming for a Lillian Bassman look (1950's fashion shooter) and I
think I got a fair rendition.

No smoking at my place, but I might be able to 'shop something in. :-)


>> - "Fresh"
>
> Very nice.
>
>> - "Mischief"
>
> In many ways that may be the best of the set.
>
> I'm really looking forward to what you can get now that she realizes she 
> actually looks good in front of the camera and will probably be more likely 
> to relax, play and get silly.
>
>>
>> The first three are lit solely by a bare, battery-powered 160-LED
>> "video light" on a light stand. $79 at Amazon. Great lighting tool.
>>
>> "Mischief" is a rework of the one I showed before with pretty subtle
>> changes suggested by a couple of people.
>>
>> Enjoy, and comments welcome.
>>
>> --
>> -bmw
>
> --
> Larry Colen [email protected] sent from i4est


I appreciate your comments, Larry. Thanks!

-- 
-bmw

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