On Jan 16, 2012, at 5:47 AM, Bruce Walker wrote:
>>> 
>>> http://goo.gl/hrPwz
>>> 
>>> From left to right:
>>> - "Once upon a time in the west"
>> 
>> Very nice, the shadows add mystery.  I'm not sure what the thing that looks 
>> like a goldfish cookie on a leather thong is,  I'd use my adjustment brush 
>> and "burn it to black" dropping the exposure and brightness.  I'd also like 
>> to see it cropped in a lot tighter on her. as much as you can off the left, 
>> and bottom.  For that matter, I might even crop off a bit of the hat in the 
>> upper right.
> 
> Yeah, I could see a square crop for this  that would do pretty-much
> what you're suggesting.
> 
> Were I to reshoot this though, I'd include a barely illuminated
> backdrop/background to give her outline definition. Mystery is nice,
> but I'm afraid it tends toward gloom territory here.

You could try some sort of rim lighting to bring out the outline and leave the 
background black.

> 
> 
>>> - "Madame X"
>> 
>> Madme X is interesting.  It almost looks overprocessed, but that ends up 
>> also almost making it look like a 1940's glamour shot. If it looked any more 
>> 40's I'd be wondering where the cigarette with curling smoke was.  I like 
>> the way that it lookes like you played with varying levels of saturation too.
> 
> I forgot to warn folks that this one is intentionally *way*
> overprocessed. I used Portraiture settings that amount to cranking all
> the smoothing sliders to 11. And I desaturated it a fair amount too. I
> was aiming for a Lillian Bassman look (1950's fashion shooter) and I
> think I got a fair rendition.
> 
> No smoking at my place, but I might be able to 'shop something in. :-)

I wasn't suggesting one, that just sort of seemed to be the canonical prop in 
photos of that era.


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