On Aug 2, 2013, at 11:53 PM, <[email protected]> <[email protected]> 
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> How many do you need to take Stan. In the workshops I've attended it was 
> advised to bring 10 images.
My target is 10 images; I can cut these down to 15 pretty easily. 
> 
> A couple of things jumped out at me upon review of your collection -
> 
> *Spring Blossom's is the title but most of the blossoms are out of focus.
I like the softness, the colors of this as is. If I had a version with the 
blossoms more in focus, I might still prefer this. But unfortunately I don't 
have an in-focus version to do the comparison. It won't be in my final set 
unless I need more flora to balance the avian fauna shots.
> *# 22 & 33 are almost identical I'd eliminate 33 as the dark mass in the 
> upper edge is more distracting than in 22.
Agree, inclusion of 33 was a mistake, it is now gone.
> *# 31's subject needs more room to the edges.
Agree, but it is uncropped. A grab shot with a 300mm on the camera, I couldn't 
get any further away without stepping off the dock.
> 
> Whose workshop is it and where is it centered?
John and Barbara Gerlach. We'll be working out of a lodge about 20 miles south 
of Munising.
> 
> Enjoy the experience and ask questions. I'd also advise having the instructor 
> look at several of your compositions thru your camera and have him show you 
> what his compositions of the same subject would be.
> You're paying him to do these things.
Good suggestion - thanks.
> 
> I've learned more about light & compositions during my workshops than any 
> other experience.
I have three "issues" on my list: light (including use of flash), composition, 
and when/how/why to use a polarizer.
> 
> Kenneth Waller
> http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/kennethwaller
> 
> ----- Original Message ----- From: "Stan Halpin" <[email protected]>
> Subject: GESO: Portfolio of nature shots
> 
> 
>> For a nature photography workshop I am taking part in (in Michigan's Upper 
>> Peninsula starting this Sunday evening), I am supposed to bring along some 
>> of my recent work. I've put together this "best of" collection, still need 
>> to narrow it down further. You have seen and commented on some of these 
>> before. Bob S. - thanks for your continued prodding on lightening up the 
>> eagle shot and thanks to others for their comments on earlier versions of 
>> several of these.
>> 
>> http://photos.stanhalpin.com/p350284105
>> 
>> stan
> 
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