The inverted pyramid is the writer's friend as far as this sort of thing is concerned.
<http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Inverted_pyramid> > On 7 Oct 2013, at 10:25, Bruce Walker <[email protected]> wrote: > > tl;dr > > It's missing an intro. There's no clear reason why it would be > fruitful to climb that mountain of text. I got three paras in and gave > up. > > Simply leaving a blank line between para's would also help, a bit. > > Tell 'em what your're going to say. > Say it. > Summarize what you said. Or indeed: Tell 'em what you're gonna tell 'em Tell 'em Tell 'em what you just told 'em (Which is not the same as the inverted pyramid) > > >> On Mon, Oct 7, 2013 at 4:06 AM, Bob W <[email protected]> wrote: >> Nobody's going to read that, whatever it's about. Several long blocks of >> text - why should anyone want to read it? >> >> Whatever it is you want to say, say it in less than 7 short sentences. >> >> B >> >>> On 7 Oct 2013, at 08:56, Larry Colen <[email protected]> wrote: Stuff -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
