I rather like the composition, but the red hair in the middle looks like a plastic helmet. Was the red channel blown out by the intensity of her hair color? If so (and if you shot RAW) pulling back on red luminance might help.
Rick http://photo.net/photos/RickW On Sun, Aug 9, 2015 at 8:16 PM, Igor PDML-StR <[email protected]> wrote: > > Dan, > > The subjects are interesting, and it could have been an interesting image, > but the composition doesn't quite work for me. > > The main problem I have is that it is not clear what should be the focus of > attention. I know I've struggled in a similar way with some images I had. I > don't know how to make it working here. > The woman on the left dominates the frame, but she almost passed the > frame (not enough space on the left). She is too dominant in the picture > to serve as a background. > Cutting her off, would shift the focus to the two women (red and green). > But I am not sure if it would be too tight to work. > Also, the fact is that those two (especially the redhair) are OOF doesn't > help. > Also, I don't know if you noticed it, - the image is tilted. > > > > Igor > > > Daniel J. Matyola Sun, 09 Aug 2015 05:31:14 -0700 wrote: > > On the streets of Manhattan: > http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=18063793&size=lg > K-01, SMC DA 1:2.8 40 mm XS. > Comments are invited and appreciated. > > > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and > follow the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
