Thanks, Igor, Rick and Frank. Yes, I know it is tilted a bit.Straightening it out cuts off too much of the woman on the left, and I liked the way it looked with the slight tilt.
Dan Matyola http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/danieljmatyola On Sun, Aug 9, 2015 at 8:16 PM, Igor PDML-StR <[email protected]> wrote: > > Dan, > > The subjects are interesting, and it could have been an interesting image, > but the composition doesn't quite work for me. > > The main problem I have is that it is not clear what should be the focus of > attention. I know I've struggled in a similar way with some images I had. I > don't know how to make it working here. > The woman on the left dominates the frame, but she almost passed the > frame (not enough space on the left). She is too dominant in the picture > to serve as a background. > Cutting her off, would shift the focus to the two women (red and green). > But I am not sure if it would be too tight to work. > Also, the fact is that those two (especially the redhair) are OOF doesn't > help. > Also, I don't know if you noticed it, - the image is tilted. > > > > Igor > > > > Daniel J. Matyola Sun, 09 Aug 2015 05:31:14 -0700 wrote: > > On the streets of Manhattan: > http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=18063793&size=lg > K-01, SMC DA 1:2.8 40 mm XS. > Comments are invited and appreciated. > > > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and > follow the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
